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mcfuck

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Member Since: 2012
Location: Sirius or Xm?
posted Saturday, August 12, 2017 1:38:55 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for mcfuck
Thank you but
save the platitudes for the platypus..
modern day atticus on papyrus, iris stay in the attic with us
attitude feline, skibowl and she fryin, isis
flyin down hill like the get down came after us, surprises
sad clown lay prone in the zone maximus
optimus prime smokin optimos now grind, sinus
we find out its too fine like she is
this heathcliff pussy cat sister with stagefright
and in this same night were just laughin cuz
she show up goofy foot didnt hit the stage right
so she exit stage left cause her age aint right
its 21 at the door and its almost 4
shes almost born, into the moonlight
a dancer, but her sign is cancer and so she moonstoned
she home soon. a fools right
but she bustop at the old spoon
divin in for the hashbrown and cold spoon
maple and vine at the side of her mind
its time to ride, full moon
colliding with him at the coat closet, both lost it
now she riding with him south of boston, lost then
past stops that certain pathways, math pays the pavements ways
a fair fare she says.
to self she perplex by whats next on the shelf
this indian cupboard just hover in blackness itself
but she lackin real wealth, she lost to timeout on the wrongside
long looks at his longstride, ride cant be over
she runnin over then, closer then
she pushin passed some poster penned
she pinned in, pushed fast too close to him
he panic and push back whats close to him
brim, hilt to the thumb and index bic pen
now she lyin stiff then, cooughin up thickness
and he wonderin outloud what kind of shit he in
wish then, she drift then, seein his lense and believen
its this end

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BulletproofCodpiece

Total Posts: 152
Member Since: 2014
Location: d[-_-]b you just got saved by the bell bitch
posted Wednesday, August 16, 2017 3:12:10 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for BulletproofCodpiece
sup playboi? what it do? this sab. finally got me recording equipment tryna get back in it. holla at ya boy. still nice widdit I see. k.i.m.

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mcfuck

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Member Since: 2012
Location: Sirius or Xm?
posted Wednesday, August 16, 2017 5:08:00 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for mcfuck
YOOOOOOOOO

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Nick_Genre

Total Posts: 3
Member Since: 2017
Location: Fort Myers, FL, USA
posted Saturday, August 19, 2017 12:09:28 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for Nick_Genre   Click Here to Email Nick_Genre
It seemed like it flowed well..im kinda used to listening to rap on a beat or even acapella....some of it i didnt quite understand what you were trying to say...but over all not bad at all...

you got any music I can check out?

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Maymon Fresh

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Member Since: 2008
Location: Can you be perfect
posted Monday, September 18, 2017 4:08:21 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Maymon Fresh   Click Here to Email Maymon Fresh
Excellence really nice..

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mcfuck

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Member Since: 2012
Location: Sirius or Xm?
posted Monday, September 18, 2017 5:14:55 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for mcfuck
thanks maymon.

see some motion over here.


lets keep it moving.

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joshnwmn

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Member Since: 2017
posted Tuesday, September 19, 2017 1:25:00 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for joshnwmn   Click Here to Email joshnwmn
Ability wise, your lyrics are great! I think you might have given up a little bit of coherency in the first little bit for rhyming and phonetics, but thatís just constructive criticism, and overall I thought it was great.

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\Saga Sphinx/

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Member Since: 2003
Location: London, England
posted Tuesday, September 19, 2017 8:18:40 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for \Saga Sphinx/   Click Here to Email \Saga Sphinx/
I've read this a couple times already.
Feels stronger with each viewing, for me.

I been kinda selfish with the replies.
Gonna try stick around for a bit.
Hope the board picks back up.

I miss the ughh heyday.

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