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Dyme Secta

Total Posts: 170
Member Since: 2017
posted Friday, December 08, 2017 6:29:04 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Dyme Secta
Let's have some fun, read along.
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Understanding why is a treasure trove. Knock'n down pedestals.
Verses hexadecimal. Water and raw vegetables. Cleanse and grow.

Auntie died drinking Coca-Cola's. Giving the FDA the cold shoulders.
The pain smolders. Chain smoker. Obviously we're getting older.

Learn there is no such thing as getting over. Out of composure.
Walking lines sliced thinner than cold cuts. What they told us.

Think life is a game now find out when you grow up. Don't go nuts.
Yell in my face all you want it's still so what. Look but don't touch.

Who knew life could hurt so much? Feel it once cant leave the rush.
Brush away the rust. Early dusk. Winters here time to layer up.

Fully in until the nervous systems had enough. Why they mad at us?
Comfortable being uncomfortable sometimes you have to adjust.

Making moves while the earth spins at a rate we cant calculate.
By the lake listen'n to the sounds that the fountain makes.

Sour grapes. Outtakes and mistakes. How much wind can you chase?
Caught in the race. We late. Capital I theory it is really high stakes.

- dymesecta

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Marty

Total Posts: 34
Member Since: 2017
posted Friday, December 08, 2017 8:12:03 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Marty
Dyme Secta
your rhymes are consistently well written
Although I think you should try to write more positive
I know I sometimes write downer-toned stuff as well
Right now I'm more in the mood for some happy stuff


It's just some advice

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\Saga Sphinx/

Total Posts: 3468
Member Since: 2003
Location: London, England
posted Monday, December 11, 2017 6:42:06 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for \Saga Sphinx/   Click Here to Email \Saga Sphinx/
There's something about your rhymes that seem familiar. Did you used to post here under another name? I hear what Marty is saying too. I can be so over focussed on 1 idea/theme that I have to consciously push myself into different states. I kinda see that in you a bit too.

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